08. 02. 2013. 08:27

Fingering Me (excerpts)

Reminiscent of Woolf's "The Waves" yet unmistakably Hungarian in its depiction of the post-socialist heritage, "Fingering Me" is a collection of short story-like vignettes or diary entries, told alternately by a male and a female narrator.

Zsuzsa Csobánka is primarily known in contemporary Hungarian literature as a poet, and her two volumes of poetry (Bog [Knot], 2009, and Hideg bűnök [Cold Sins], 2011) have been widely praised for their objective tone and the intense metaphorical depiction of bodily experiences. The publication of her first work of fiction, Fingering Me, in 2011 marks a new phase in her oeuvre in terms of genre, but it is also deeply rooted in the author’s previous poetical output. Although the somatic discourse on eroticism and death are not absent from contemporary Hungarian literature (Attila Bartis and Krisztina Tóth even appear on the back cover of the volume, but Márió Z. Nemes, Endre Kukorelly or “Laura Spiegelmann” – the pseudonym of a supposedly male author – are also key representatives of this visceral tone); the female perspective on these issues is a relatively recent phenomenon (with Edina Tallér’s A húsevő [“The Carnivore”, 2010], Zsófia Bán’s Amikor még csak az állatok éltek [“When There Were Only Animals”, 2012] or Noémi Kiss’ Ikeranya [“Twin Mother”, 2013]). The vivid reception of Csobánka’s novel indicates that the text has challenged both the genre criteria of the novel and the controversial notion of the feminine mode of writing.

Fingering Me is a markedly lyrical collection of short story-like vignettes or diary entries, narrated alternately by a male and a female narrator, the ex-lovers called Martin and Marla. All the other characters are somehow connected to this past romance (with Martin’s [grand?]mother as the most finely delineated among them), as the web-like family tree at the end of the novel shows. Considered an ironical gesture by many critics, the family tree can be read as an allusion to One Hundred Years of Solitude or, on a more general level, the metaphor of intangibly complex human relationships. The story is narrated along metaphorical and associative rather than logical lines, which makes it difficult, if not impossible, to sum up the plot. The book reads like a loosely connected series of dramatic monologues, linked by the motifs of blood, wound, heart, yarn and flesh. The topics of abandonment, sexual initiation, old age, death and transgression keep recurring in both narrators’ chapters, shedding light on different, often gendered aspects of these experiences. The alternating voices of Marla and Martin can also be read as a mourning process, verbalizing the bodily memories and emotional turmoil of the death of love. The lyrical voice and the metaphorical junctures provide a textual rhythm, as in The Waves by Virginia Woolf. Yet the book is unmistakably a Hungarian one, with its depiction of rural and urban Eastern European settings, and the bleakness of the post-socialist heritage.

Fingering Me, a book which is unique in contemporary Hungarian fiction, reminds the reader of works by authors like Elfriede Jelinek, Denis Robert or Angela Carter. From Woolf’s stream of consciousness to Hélène Cixous’ écriture feminine and the often traumatic inscriptions of eroticism in fiction, Csobánka’s book invites various modes of reading. An English edition would open up a fertile dialogue between contemporary Hungarian literature and the various literatures written in English, with special regard to the depiction of women’s experience and embodiment as such – two highly contested thematic and theoretical issues of cultural studies today. Zsuzsa Csobánka can be rightfully called the pioneer of this tendency in our literature, creating a new idiom of embodiment and eroticism, as she herself puts it in an ars poetica-like statement: “There is no sober language of sexuality between pornography and pathology.”


Cika Madonna was bolstered up by my Mumsy. She was a tiny woman with deep ditches of wrinkles running all over her body, I saw it when my Mumsy nodded towards a big heap of clothes, ‘You can take any of these that fits.’ Cika Madonna walked slowly to the heap, and like a suspicious rat, she sniffled around the combies, dressing-gowns, sweaters. ‘I don’t wear them anyway,’ my Mumsy said, and cast a meaningful look at Cika Madonna’s naked ankle, its veins bulging under the coat of dirt. Her nails were thick and horny because she usually went barefoot’d, Mumsy only let me do that in the summer, ‘You have to be beautiful, my son, women don’t like sloppy men.’ I hadn’t seen gnarled feet before and Cika Madonna was the first woman to show me her breasts, too, while hastily tumbling into my Mumsy’s flowery blouses.

She didn’t speak much, everyone knew it anyway that she used to go to the carrion pit for dead cats, hedgehogs, when there was no one at all to take pity on her. Always at the end of the month, and at the beginning of the year. We once peeped at her with Rudi. For a week, we would hide behind the hedging in front of her shed every morning, waiting for her to go for a hunt. My Mumsy gave me a helluva smack afterwards, she must have smelt where I’d been. The carrion pit was at least a ten-minute walk, and on top of that, there was hardly any hiding. Rudi was just about to turn back because Cika Madonna kept stopping and we thought she must have spotted us, but she just dug her nails into her downy hair. ‘Watch out, my son, women also go bald, but with them it’s not their foreheads rising, but the hair grows ever thinner, and in the end it just gets humiliating and pointless to dig into it, because every time a mop stays among the combs of your fingers, as if they were sunshades against the shining scalp.’ Thus, as long as I could, I just watched them shaking their hair, running their fingers through it, since they could only do so for some time. While others were taking snapshots of hollow bellies, bulging breasts or round hips, I had dozens of secret photos of women tossing their hair. The image of course was only a fragment of the movement, it didn’t have anything to do with life, but those pictures still staggered me when I came across them years later. Rough hair with broken ends, unkempt and greasy, but still, these were the women who once drove me mad.

Her arms were covered with bruises, hedgehogs were aggressive, but still weaker than Cika Madonna. When she turned up in the village, people whispered behind her back and withdrew into their houses. She trusted holiday-makers like Mumsy, who might forget the begging in a year’s time. They were relieved to leave marks in the untouched, virgin snow in the winter, seeing that no one had broken in that year either. We were driven out of the city by the heat only, actually, it was easier to bear it there, but Cika Madonna didn’t know this. Only Mumsy and me knew that Astoria and the Western Railway Station knew nothing about poverty, and the Madonna about begging either, since what she did was simply sitting down on the dusty dirt road in front of the houses, singing songs and waiting for us to wake up.

‘Give me your shoulder,’ the Madonna told me, I was afraid if she had really seen me, and might decide to revenge the peepers, leave without the stockings and shoes, and tell Mumsy everything. But she only needed my shoulder to lean on something. You see, Marla, that’s what you’re all like, you women. She only needed me for taking her slouching pumps on. My first lover dropped me after I’d been caressing the rape out of her for half a year. She couldn’t even be touched at first, only with words, that’s when I became the master of sentences, I took it to perfection, which verb fits which noun, what kind of exaggerations, adjectives I am to pile up so that she opens her thighs at last. And you know, Marla, once I managed to put my dick into a raped woman, I thought to myself that there was no impossible thing in this world. And then came the other one, Gertrude. By that time I had sworn to God she wouldn’t let herself. Gertrude was older than me, a bony woman and afraid in the dark at night. I lived at her place for two years. Board and lodging in turn for talking to her, she said. I had been living there for almost a year when one night she fled to my room from the banging storm and cried out, ‘I saw a miracle’. I broke out laughing loudly, and then Gertrude, to prove her point, knelt down by my bed, took all my toes into her mouth, one by one, she rattled and cried, then went silent and sucked me. This made me remember neat men’s feet and what Mumsy told me about not being sloppy. I wondered if she liked to take them into her mouth, too, and maybe that’s why she had warned me.

This is what I saw, Marla, as I reached for your feet. Your hands are real maiden’s hands, I said to myself. I say, I can talk anyone into bed, if I have to, and you were no exception, don’t you think that. You are so alike, you, women. I was sitting on the edge of your bed, grasping your feet, and later the shrieking hedgehogs came to my mind while I was licking you, I say, it was the very same frequency that Cika Madonna had wrought out of them. She was hitting the ground with a knife tied onto a long rod, from a distance one could think she had no idea what she was doing. Blood was spurting everywhere, ‘There are more of them,’ Rudi whispered aside, and I was nodding, because one hedgehog couldn’t have possibly made all that noise. While she was skinning the animals, Cika Madonna’s face got all bloody, her arm covered in bruises. We heard her cursing aloud, the jumping fleas might have bitten her face as well, they sprang into her mouth, her nose.

It was there and then that I learnt the most about women, that the Madonna is a bitch, with bugs and insects dwelling in her orifices. Then she staggered, lost her balance while she was changing her skirt, and a raw, sour smell hit me from between her legs. Mosquitoes flew out. My Mumsy warned me not to gaze, but I was only looking at the filmy membrane of their wings. They were fluffy and shiny, just like the Madonna’s hair. The skin above the skull was white, white as the hedgehogs were when she skinned them. There might be something white and colourless about death. It was death, when I gripped your thighs, and everything got blurred. My face is all bloody all, I curse aloud while the bugs are biting me. Rudi is calling out, ‘Let’s go,’ but I don’t move, I’m just watching the Madonna’s mouth moving, and while peeling the thorny skin off, she’s singing.


Mumsy dies

The bundle was quite heavy, she slowered her steps and was panting for breath. Mumsy felt uncomfortable, she wasn’t even consoled by the fact that she deeply believed in what she was just about to do. The weekend houses were all silent, well after the end of the season the town was abandoned. In the gardens, she still saw unfinished sand castles here and there and a flat collapsible boat. Maybe it’s punctured, that’s why it hasn’t been stolen. Swallows were sitting on the wires, they made a terrible noise while settling on the line at equal distances, egging on each other, then they all flew up, made a circle, and sat back to their places where their companions were waiting for their turns. The bundle was silent, too, she knew it wasn’t normal either, however, noises would have been even worse. She would have told herself, ‘I must be hallucinating, nothing can filter out of this.’ At the end of the street she stopped. She didn’t even admit it to herself, but she needed a break before reaching the river. It was called a river, but of course it was hardly a few inches, sometimes only ankle-deep. When she was a child they often cooled their heated bodies in it, later she used to bring Martin here so that he sees other women’s thighs, too, not only hers. ‘Mumsy, I’m really fed up,’ she remembered this very well, Martin wanted more and more every week, after the bathing suits there had to be girls in bikinis, tongs, topless and then he demanded nudists. ‘Martin, you’re hopeless, don’t you ever marry, my son,’ she told him, but Martin just broke out laughing, ‘But how will you have grandkids then, Mumsy?’ he asked back. Mumsy went silent, Martin’s father came to her mind and such commonplaces as blood is thicker than water and that those chasing cunts as a kid would never get settled later either. ‘Mumsy, I’m fed up,’ he would say, ‘I’ve already returned Edina’s keys.’ Mumsy would be eternal, ‘I’ll only love you, Mumsy, till I die,’ Martin shouts, and pulls his mother onto himself, and Mumsy is actually happy, she is at her happiest now.

She’s thinking about this while she’s picking her way, where is this sentence gone, where does the wind carry all the confessions, promises, how impossibly far Martin from her now is, she has no chance at all to change anything. Maybe the bundle. The water is surrounded by thorny weeds, she’s hesitating for a moment whether she really wants this. She doesn’t sit down as she planned, she just loosens the knot at the mouth of the sack. The humidity hits her face, she curses in desperation because she feels that she’s weak after all. She doesn’t dare to open it wider for fear that they might instinctively crawl out and she might even have to chase them around then. Her mother used to call this “just taming them” – I’m taming the little pets, look, you pick the skin right at the neck, it makes them freeze because they think they’re between their mother’s teeth. It’s easy afterwards. It doesn’t move, doesn’t make any noise, and so it is barely alive. An object, lifeless, like throwing a stone far away. The child Mumsy raises her brows. ‘Are you being distrustful, you bitch?’, her mother asked, and pinched her face. It hurt, she always began to hate her at this point. It was an old game of theirs, mummy pinched, Mumsy gasped. Like the kittens in the sack fifty years later, as Mumsy leans over them. ‘It might be easier if I name them.’

She addresses the first one as Leila, ‘Come, kitten Leila, I’ll tame you.’ She gets it by the neck, but it doesn’t work out at first, the animal doesn’t freeze but is kicking nervously. The whining makes Mumsy upset, she pinches the skin tighter at the neck and succeeds this time. The cat goes silent, lets go of its legs, the body is hanging languidly. It doesn’t move, doesn’t make any noise, and so it is barely alive. From her hip, she turns towards the river and tosses the cat in. ‘Fly, kitten Leila, fly.’ I don’t want to remember the blonde curls, waiting for you in front of Centrum, the pub where you sat down next to me. Damn you, kitten.

She starts to hum for the second one, ‘Anna, Anna, Anna.’ The animal smells danger, and feeling Mumsy’s rage, wants to pull away. Anybody watching this would have looked away, it’s not a sight for humans, as with the kitten in hand, Mumsy is slowly undressing, down to her combie. ‘We should tell at the grocer’s,’ the bushes whisper, and in the bush the six- and seven-year-old sons of Feri, the neighbour. But neither Gabor, nor Mark has ever seen a woman’s body before, their mother is shy, keeps hiding herself day and night as if she were hiding a treasure. Her legs are thin, only her belly swells disproportionally, and it wasn’t even because of the boys, the neighbouring woman used to say that she is carrying too many burdens, and she cannot shit it out and that she should only tell Feri once, ‘my dear Feri, it just won’t do for me,’ however, the shit is only accumulating in her belly, getting ever bigger. Those who don’t know her think that she’s pregnant, a layer of skin upon the barrel of fat or water, with no bum at all to balance it. Mumsy stops, the combie is fluttering, curling in the wind, Gabor and Mark are feeling something strange, their breathing fastens, they don’t know what this is.

Mumsy now raises her arm, ‘Dance,’ Martin says, ‘Dance, Mumsy,’ but it’s another image now, the room is humid, Martin is getting married, he’s happy, only Mumsy is out of breath, too much fag and guests, stop it, Mumsy, your only son is getting married! Mumsy stops, snaps her hand, ‘Don’t you dare to order me about or haul me up for anything, my son, anymore,’ and rushes away, Martin is standing there, still hearing Mumsy’s hissing, even though all is silent now, only the wedding band is playing, but that doesn’t matter. ‘Swing-swang, kitten Anna, fly away,’ swing-swang, and it sinks into a deep sleep. Gabor and Mark are terrified, they didn’t see what this neighbour in combies got in her hand, they only see it after the splash, because Mumsy misses the direction and kitten Anna hits against a rock. It doesn’t move, doesn’t make any noise, and so it is barely alive.

The bundle is silent, ‘Cathy, kitty-cat,’ she’s fondling it daintily, ‘your back breaks, I’ll crash your skull,’ she’s singing in a drowned voice, and the two kids cannot even move, the bigger is feeling nauseous, though, and the smaller one has wet himself. They are afraid and cursing the minute they slipped away after lunch, ‘My God, good God,’ the bigger one can only think of this, and the smaller is murmuring to himself, ‘I promise I’d be good, I promise, I just want my Mummy.’ In the meantime, he’s keeping his eyes tightly shut. Mumsy is naked now, the hair between her legs is grey, she digs into it with her left hand, rubbing it, grasping her breasts as if she could carry their weight. Her face is wet, Martin had left me, ‘Don’t you dare, my son, to bring any more women to me, and this Kate, I swear to God, I’ll crush her, gut her and curse her till my mouth bleeds, because there’s no fucking such women for you, son, no, there is no such thing that I cannot tame these little pets.’ With the third she gets her hands wet. In the summer the water reaches up to her ankles, but it only touches her wrists now, there is no flow, the water keeps the body down. It could still be warm if she put it out onto the dry, but this one is wet already, cold, and that’s how it has frozen, whether she pinches it at the neck or elsewhere.

Mumsy is dreaming. She’s finished with the lil’unes, she has enclosed them into themselves. To tame is to let close. Not moving, not making any noise. Just watch it getting closer.


Passing right now

Me Mumsy, I’m burying Marla today. The most beautiful woman I’ve ever seen, the most beautiful woman to whom I’ve lied the most, as if to myself. But Szofka is irreplaceable. Because Szofka is earth and mud, too, do forgive me, ‘cause Szofka is belief and disgrace, too, do forgive me. Because God had sewn Szofka’s hair into my shirt, me Mumsy, you had taught me this, even if Edina’s face got swelled, even if I leant on the wheel that afternoon, life is only Szofka. Without Szofka there is no Marla either, but without Marla, everything is just there, everything is a lot better, now that there is no Marla. When I hit her for the first time, you came to my mind, how we always hit because of a woman, we, men, me Dadsy, you forgot to message me this, and now from beyond the grave you’re telling me in vain. Grandpa knew, he told me, ‘Listen, Martin, you also need some spice for life, the fuzzy lap of almond-eyed women that drive you crazy, because you’d be homesick even there.’ Szofka knows this, you’ve made the right choice, she’s gasping for her breath, waiting, ‘Don’t you hurry, you’ll soothe her, because her heart gets tired sooner, while you’re leaning against the wheel that Autumn afternoon, she’s preparing herself already.’

Edina is long dead. Don’t you care about the swells, even if the constat says it would take more than eight days, you are already elsewhere. Never where you should be, Grandpa, to be happy is to be on the road. ‘No, Martin, you are simply a coward. A coward to live and a coward to die, you’re digging the earth so a woman can fill your mouth with mud afterwards. There is only one woman like that in the world, and she is filling herself with mud in you, and you’re stammering in vain for forgiveness. You think that Szofka forgives you, but it’s you who cannot forgive yourself.’

Me Mumsy, I’m burying Marla. Grandpa says I should be honest and fair with her at least in my heart now, but I don’t understand what he means. Because Marla is dead. I should write about her nails, because they are still growing, and her hair, she used to dye it, the redheaded bitch, I’ll tell you, that’s what she was. At last she showed her true colours. ‘Now even your photos look pitiful, my son,’ Mumsy, don’t you rip on me, get the fuck off. ‘There’s no escape for you, Martin, you keep forgetting this minor fact, the wound has never healed on Edina’s face. Her mouth was ripped, she called me asking what to do, because I’m your mother and if I don’t know you, then there’s no one on this earth who does. There is no one, I said, and hang up. I saw Edina in front of me, standing in the hall with the red bakelite receiver in her hand, you had got it from the company. I went into the kitchen, put on a coffee, Edina was far away.’ Mumsy, stop it. ‘No, Martin, you’ll listen this time. By the time the coffee boiled down, Edina was standing in the door, I knew it was her because she gave two short rings, as we used to, as she had learnt it. Your father used to ring like that, when he did so for the last time he had long had that German whore, and I said to myself I wouldn’t open the door even if I died of it. Now God himself could knock. You could’ve learnt from that. One cannot escape, in the end, you can stand there with a stupid face all smartened up, and God is just laughing loudly.’

‘In the morning, Edina was lying there curled up, with her feet drawn under herself. When I woke her up she began to swear she would scratch the eyes of that bitch who took you away from her, because of whom her face was swollen and purple. Martin, you know, I found her the most beautiful then. You have been pampered by life, all women whom you’ve made fall in love with you loved you till they all went to the dogs.’ You’re wrong, Mumsy, Marla doesn’t love me. ‘You’re only imagining Marla, Martin. Marla doesn’t exist. There is no such spice of life, your Grandfather’s stupid fallacies about lovers and wives, but these things only exist in your head. I am here, Martin, and your Grandfather is here, too, your father and Edina. Szofka only exists, too, when you look into the mirror. Szofka forgives you, only you cannot forgive yourself, because you’re just as filthy as the others, not a bit better, not even purer.’

‘Picture this, Martin, you’re a liar, a weakling and a coward, for a little fuck you’d lie the heavens down, and you don’t give a damn whom it hurts.’ But why would it hurt anybody, Mumsy? There is nothing outside of me, there is no one inside me either, there is only you and me, we only imagine father, when he lies that he’s been to playing soccer, we imagine Szofka and Edina, the woman who forgives and the woman who’s wearing my marks on her body. Marla is silent. Marla is sacred. The most beautiful woman to whom I’d never have lied if she hadn’t force me to. ‘Martin, Marla is you.’ The girl with the fuzzy lap, almond blossom.

Mumsy, I’m burying Marla tomorrow into the earth, into the mud, forgive me. The belief and the disgrace that maybe I have nothing eternal inside me, which, just like Marla’s nails, keeps growing, it is full of life, like Marla’s hair. But I have nothing. All is silent, Mumsy, forgive me for lying to You, even if you knew, how could you not know, Marla is just dying, and I cannot bury her, Marla’s tender, almond-eyed face is covered in loosened bandages, and I disappear in that, even if Szofka is the only woman, Marla has killed me, Mumsy, sometimes I wish your womb dried up.



The body is heaving slowly. A weight on the heart, every breath is for easing it, pushing out the suffocating particles from the flow. Deadlines, questions and bills are mere biology now. The pillow and the left hand beneath the head, gazing into the light, not feeling numb. Letting the wrists fall gently, might as well move, the other one resting on the hip, comfortable angles. Knees slightly drawn up. Sleeping. Silence, moss is rustling among the Buda mountains, Marla is drawing the garage door loudly, she will slightly lean before entering. I must go back for the photos, she thinks to herself, because it’s still better if she fetches them than letting them to be found in the rubbish years later by foreigners. The unknown, yellowish picture in the attic, how could it fly up there? Of course it was explained with the bombings, the force of the explosion had pushed it up there, and the coincidences had somehow arranged that Grandpa and Grandma ended up in the same attic. It could be beautiful, watching them fly, she thinks, and switches on the light. In the garage forgotten tools and machines, a table, a box was put above it for the nails years ago. The tenners, the sixers, and the female screws separately.

With car keys in hand, she’s still thinking about the house, the newly varnished parquet, the smell of paint. The flat had a clean smell, as if it used to be dirty before, but not at all, after the elders everything just has to be cleaned up. They kept repeating this all the time. In the corners mould has appeared, the gas heater is clicking, and all those walls leave too little space for humans. She sees in front of her the dining table, the compulsive family occasions always taught her a lot, she would prepare perfectly, especially for her own roles. Maybe this exactly was the problem here, maybe the roles are not clearly cast among all those grinning adults, the girls limping uncertainly – until they become big with child they are not actually family yet. Then they can give advice or take it, don’t pick it up, it will stop crying anyway. Testing the spaces, who can dominate the others and to what extent, how much can be carved off them. Based on age or gender. When the body awakens to its own consciousness, everything coming from outside is like coming from underwater, how much a new body can remember of all this? All those dialogues eavesdropped from the bathtub, when she used to wash her hair the tiles and the pipes were carrying the sounds, they got distorted into inarticulate noises, maybe this is all that remains from these talks, too. What remains of the newspapers under the carved off paint or the old fillings?

The window was taken out without any cracks along with the frame, on the new one there’re bars, and through those you can look far. She’s thinking of Grandpa and Grandma, now that dusk comes so early, they are standing in the window, it’s an evening ritual, Grandpa is holding Grandma’s shoulder, they are watching the city opening up to their drawing room, all the lights are familiar, parting the houses below here and there, buildings, there is the Bazilika, look. The flat is darkish now, only the little lamp is on. I’ve chosen the most beautiful woman. Grandma laughs, turns to him and squeezes Grandpa’s side. Kisses him slowly. The grey curls move, as if swept by the wind, but it’s only Grandpa leaning on Grandma again and again. They peel off each other the hesitating arms, Grandpa moves, Grandma waves back. You’ve got too many clothes on, mademoiselle, he says naughtily, winks, Grandma’s eyes are glowing. The lights outside curl a bit up together, from the other bank Pest is mirroring the old eyes back, that’s not the sky, the black pupils are expanding. The body doesn’t move anymore like it used to, or like it should, he slowly helps off the cardigan, Grandma helps with the belt. Then the buttons of the blouse are clumsy again, the fingers thick, they have grown huge in comparison with the tight holes, I’ve grown old, she laughs. Grandma is thinking of the pictures, the child’s face, the longish, egg-shaped forehead, the skull. What is it like to look for and find Grandpa in that, hoping that the bone is eternal, that there might be something eternal in humans, despite all those years, all those mornings, waiting in front of the bathroom, even if it all becomes mere dust, it still can blend with dignity. His countenance is clear, I’ve fallen in love with its curiosity, but she doesn’t confess it. It should be written down before it is too late.

He’s leading his wife to the bed, they are pacing slowly, carefully, the knee doesn’t bend easily, at certain moves it even hurts. But now it’s throbbing, maybe more silently then before, how much sweeter music this is, the woman thinks while her husband sits her next to himself onto the bed. Upon the bra a combie, the old silk one, the little lamp makes it look hazy, but it’s the most beautiful fleshly colour, according to the old fashion a quality brand. They undress separately. The two bodies are bending next to each other, there is nothing erotic, nothing wild about this, and it’s still the most passionate and the most human of all, the way these two are now undressing for each other. They are not greedy, not tearing anything off, this is how the textile becomes sacred and the body becomes sacred, too, one and the other, bending down, as if onto an altar. The two people are now the closest to each other. There’s no fear, because there is only closeness, there is no envy, only beauty, and there is no foreignness, only peace. The man is resting, the socks crawling out of the depth of the trousers, it’s not easy either. The smells get more intensive, the Buda street is silent, slowly all the neighbours get home, put the supper on the heat, check the homework. The woman’s arms are hardly moving, loosening the skirt, steps out of it, it slips down slowly, she cannot wriggle out of the combie, the man stands in front of her, helps it off. He helps her to undress, as if helping her to bathe, not peeping at her breasts. Those are shrinked, of course, the wrinkles make them formless and they also hang, but she doesn’t hide them. No shyness, no shame. You know it like your own. The man nods, now comes the shirt, some other time he would take on the pyjama bottom. Now he’s undressing. Her tights reach up the thighs. She unbuttons the garters, gently rolling them down on her legs. She puts them on the bedside, too, beside the skirt and the blouse, next to the man’s shirt and folded up trousers. The terry cloth bathrobes are lying unconsciously around. They are panting, the woman sitting in langerie, the man in his underwear. The body covered with spots, freckles and warts, their cells have grown old together. The man’s back is full of ditches like gaps in the dried up earth, the woman’s is like a softer loess soil. The body is heaving slowly. A weight on the heart, every breath is for easing it. All those years cannot be condensed. In the end, it can be summed up on a bedside, the way they are sitting there next to each other, desiring each other as never before. Don’t switch off the little lamp, I want to see you, Grandma says.

From the garage, stairs lead up to the house, the rooms are empty, she goes to the bedroom. Watching, the body is heaving slowly. A weight on the heart, every breath is for easing it, pushing out all the particles from the flow. Deadlines, questions and bills are mere biology now. The pillow and the left hand beneath the head, gazing into the light, not feeling numb. Letting the wrists fall gently, might as well move, the other one resting on the hips, comfortable angles. Knees slightly drawn up. The Comb Man is sleeping. Marla is sitting on the bedside and begins to undress.


Csobánka Zsuzsa: Belém az ujját

Budapest: JAK/Prae.hu, 2011

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